#16

In this spring semester, about my writing i can't improve. Although this semester my teacher gave a good idea about writing something on blog. I can use my brainstorm to write and don't care about making mistake grammar, composition ( introduction, body, conclusion). It is useful for me because English is my second language not mother langague. My words limited. But in my composition class. I think really hard for me to write an essay not thinking by my mother language and translate to English because some articles are difficult and i must use my own langue to tranlate. Addition about my translated sentences do not mean as Amecian sentences. I need my teacher to guide me how to correct the sentences. When readers read, can understand my writing. I know this class is composition not gramma. However, from them I can inprove my writing. Everyone on their life has mistakes. And from experiecing mistakes they can develop. I don't know about my teacher's feeling when he/she reads this. But if they think that they don't satisfy with this. I am Sorry Sorry Sorry. My country has sentence " Medicine is not sweet but good for health. Truth will make angry to people."